Terrance rough show (90% done)

http://vimeo.com/33573476

Description:
The name of my show is “UndaRated NYC”, This is a hip-hop show similar to Yo! MTV Raps or even BET’s Rap City but more on a 2012 style with more in depth documentary style interviews. The look i was going for was real grungy and authentic, just real NYC look.

*Note* couldn’t upload videos one by one because of my vimeo limitation, so i use all in one sequence.

7 comments for “Terrance rough show (90% done)

  1. Sara Gonzalez
    December 14, 2011 at 7:07 pm

    it looks more like a documentary. but the font is readable! Can’t really see NYC from the opening

  2. December 14, 2011 at 7:30 pm

    You’re graphics are pretty professional, the only thing that I would change is the darkness or shading thats on the left hand side of the first lower third. It’s readable, but it would be more clear if that shadow was not there.

  3. aramirez1
    December 14, 2011 at 10:49 pm

    i really like the tone and lighting choice for your show. you established your show pretty well right from the opening and music in all. my only thing is the text of NYC, i still can’t really read it.

  4. PhilippeChery
    December 15, 2011 at 3:10 pm

    It’s hard to see the “NYC” in the opening because the colors are too close to the colors of the background.

  5. Gaquanna B.
    December 16, 2011 at 12:17 am

    I really don’t have any criticism I thought it was great

  6. Alfred Parsard
    December 16, 2011 at 1:21 am

    great effort and very industrial looking graphics. Definitely has an underground feel.

  7. Professor Phelps
    December 17, 2011 at 12:00 pm

    I like the change you made in the open for the “NYC” at the bottom. However, you did not make this change for your credit sequence. The GFX should be cohesive.

    The Lower third works.. Biut be careful of not being within title safe.. It is OK for web.. But if this footage is ever played on a TV screen you will lose your text.. For your final please make these title safe.

    The info graphic is tough to read.. too much silver and black. It looks cool, but the point is to read it. That should always come first.

    the credits are good (Other than the NYC comment from above)

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