12 comments for “Fabulous Ms. Anonymous

  1. Sara Gonzalez
    December 14, 2011 at 4:48 pm

    From the opening, some of the images, are too transparent and can’t see the people in it. And the information graphics, is too big in front of the person, perhaps placing it somewhere else? but the color is good.

    • Gaquanna B.
      December 15, 2011 at 2:09 am

      I’m going to try and make the info graphics smaller I think that will help

  2. December 14, 2011 at 8:00 pm

    Hey Kimberly, if you just put the link in the box without doing anything to it, your video would show on the site, if you don’t add the link to it. You’re shapes are sharp for the most part but your ovals aren’t smooth, maybe you can use the circle marquee tool to make them smooth, add your effects and then if you right click the layer you can convert it into a smart object and it will keep the effects when you drag it into after effects.

    • Gaquanna B.
      December 15, 2011 at 1:58 am

      Thanks that will actually help a lot

  3. December 14, 2011 at 8:36 pm

    I think can end the edits a lot smoother…the music starts abruptly and can bring it down. the color of the lower third is good but i think since its black should make the words a little bigger. I like your information graphics…is it going to stay in middle the entire time? Because you’ll be covering the person or w.e the information its asking

    • Gaquanna B.
      December 15, 2011 at 2:07 am

      No it’s not going to stay there but I have other videos I need to add in then I’ll fix that and I haven’t decided on the music yet so that’s going to be fixed too.

  4. aramirez1
    December 14, 2011 at 10:30 pm

    I think you’re on the right track with your presentation, just be careful of certain things. in your transitioning, it’s too quick and abrupt, i could barely read what the text were saying. and the colors also could hurt the overall texts. just adjust the colors, and your transitioning, making it slower and careful with your text choice.

    • Gaquanna B.
      December 15, 2011 at 2:08 am

      Ok thanks I’ll work on those things

  5. PhilippeChery
    December 15, 2011 at 2:27 pm

    I like the direction that you’re going in and the colors do seem to go with what you’re trying to accomplish. I feel that the text should have a different font that also expresses the style you’re looking for and I feel that the video seems stretched out.

  6. Alfred Parsard
    December 16, 2011 at 12:43 am

    i like where you are going with the show, however it doesn’t look like it’s in hd. Your picture looks stretched as well.

  7. Terrance
    December 16, 2011 at 8:14 am

    i get your show from the start, its straight to the point, no critics from me, good stuff overall.

  8. Professor Phelps
    December 17, 2011 at 11:32 am

    This has come a long way.. But it still needs some work.

    The open needs a bit more clarity. I can’t see the silhouette of Ms. Anonymous (I like the way your brought in the text though). She needs to be apparent. The text in your before and after is also hard to read and up there not long enough.

    The background silhouette needs to pop! I didn’t see it until the 3rd watch

    the end of the open ends well!

    The Lower 3rd text should be larger.. but be careful that everything falls within title safe.

    the text on your infor graphics takes way too long to come on screen. Also think about adjusting your layout to make the design seem balanced. Go back to the layouts of the ads we did in week three.

    Your credits need a BUNCH of work. They are too slow, too small, and have no feel of your show.. Maybe add the silhouette.

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